good stuff
current events, good animation. yea it works.
Reviews for "Ozy's Masterstroke"
funny
this explains why they all died so perfectly
Nice
Bout time Billy got his memorial flash, Mike had news...doesn't count.
Neways, you forgot to put in the part(s) of the movie that FEATURED Manhattans glowing dongle...good flash in any case
I never...
.. saw the moonwalk so literally.
some nice work you got there xD
Funny... very funny
I think that this was reasonably well thought out, but it does have room for more with the jokes and the plot exposition. I like that Adrian Veidt had some hand in Michael Jackson's death and the way the you mirrored the Comedian with Billy Mays. I'm sure you could have fit Farrah Fawcett in there as well, making her John Osterman's ex-girlfriend and creating the fact that rough anal sex with him gave her Anal Cancer, for example?
The outfit that you gave Dr. Manhattan could have used a little more work, as it's not quite up to what was used in the movie. Also, for me the mask that you had for Rorschach was too animate - his expression didn't change that quickly or violently, like some sort of screensaver.
I liked the easter egg and I think it's a poorly drawn method of showing dislike for Harry Potter. Perhaps the music could have been quietened down a little for the thrash metal, but other than that, it's funny again.
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zappawadda responds:
I was thinking of mirroring Farrah Fawcett in some way, but to be honest I didn't know who she was until she died. Then two hours later my attention shifted to MJ.
The Rorschach mask was only meant to be on screen for a short time, but I agree, it needs more work.
Thanks for the thorough review!