Eh, not bad but not great
Your animation was a little sloppy with the mouthing and movements but other than that, it was not bad. The song had a pretty good quality but sometimes i would hear a good amount of static, but thats common with flash music videos. The scenes were pretty funny but I wished that for the chorus you'd have come up with a different situation than using the same one 3 times in a row. Anyway, keep working and I'm positive you'll be making some great stuff in the future.
um,
the animation is a little too rough,
but the song is good.
the combination of funky song and cute but creepy drawing style makes a weird feeling crowing in my heart:
OMG the puppets are alive!
too much repetitive animation, add more thoughts to it!
Ugly
goo song, but jesus, that was one ugly animation.
ake some time, and detail your designs better, because it just doesn't look good at all.
if your going to highly critical at least give me a constructive critical view not one that a 4 year old would give, thanks
Great song, but sloppy execution
I loved the song you chose, it was definitely very catchy and funny. Unfortunately your actual animation left a lot to be desired. I saw a lot of corners were cut, you used tweens when really they shouldn't have been used and it took away from the animation. You didn't redraw limbs so when you tweened them the other end of the appendage would stick out from the body or just move awkwardly making nothing about their movement organic or natural in any way. Another HUGE corner that was cut is that you just reused that same part for the chorus three times in the animation. Now this is more understandable because the song is long but really it gets boring for the viewer. This choice is definitely more forgivable because this saved you hours upon hours of extra work coming up with new animation ideas for the other choruses. Leaving many details and crude tweens unaltered though is less forgivable which is why I give you a lower score, really shape tweens should be left alone most of the time, especially for gore effects. One last thing that maybe shouldn't bother me but REALLY does is that your character who is the survivor has a name tag that says Bob. Yet the narrator, or singer, is singing from the perspective of Bob. Bob is the Zombie and Tom is the survivor. I realize this shouldn't be much of an issue but if you take the time to animate an entire song, attention to a detail as big as that should be payed attention to. Overall nice work though, and just don't get lazy or sloppy by the end. I mean really it takes five minutes to throw on a replay button which greatly increases it's overall presentation, rather then having an anti-climatic finish greeted with no credits or information on the artist and just a blank screen.
Good Work, take what I said into consideration, and I still enjoyed the animation greatly!
-Zeph R
i know i kept thinking the names were th opposit way round for some reason didnt realise till i finished and was like ohhh sugar! but i didnt think anyone would really notice, but clearly you have a keen eye ;D
yes i did forget a replay button and i agree did look sloppy
and the whole thing with tweening how else do people make everything move is there a secret im unaware of or do you just draw it differently in different frames?
because i really want to get away from that sloppyness too!!
im sure theres an easier way so if you do know a way feel free to pm me thanks!
but i take your review into great consideration and i highly appreciate it! :)
cool but...
A little domesticated for zombies