Hey there MetalRenard!
I must say, this is quite a good track! I'm not really into metal of any kind (at least not like I used to be when I was younger) but I am really digging the electronic/metal fusion you've got going on here. I could clearly hear the portions of the song that inspired you, and they fit really well into the overall build of the song. I particularly liked 2:00-2:20. I think it would be pretty cool if the song was a tad bit longer, but that's only a minor thing. Great stuff!