Dude.
That was awesome. I loved the sketchy style drawing and I'll be honest. I lol'd at the penis part. The ending scene was epic too. All you need is:
- Sound. Trust me with the right music, you have a possible front page.
- Length. You need to add more to your next animation, making it longer would definatly increase the score.
Other than that, it was awesome. Keep it up. :)