a bit of advice
dude, no offence, but all ur "punk" shit sounds exactly the fucking same. it has no clearly defined direction or parts to it, and it might sound like you were improvising except for the concrete and unoriginal guitar licks you have going. if u want to make better music you need to repeat stuff a bit more often or maybe make some parts stand out a little more. im not telling you to make two different parts then go back and forth between untill whoever is listening wets themselves from boredom. but if it sounds like ur music is going no where and never returns to any key parts people get bored and angry cuz they dont know whats going on, believe me, i know. i play guitar in a punk band and have played guitar for 6 years now, all styles, anywhere from jazz to death metal, i know what im talking about.
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