Reviews for N. Zero vs O. Zero

[Jehb]

Not that great

The biggest probablem is that there is to much talking (well writing xD) plus there isen't the greatest ammount of time to read it. basically it needs:
- more fighting, cuz right now its really boring
- longer reading time, cuz theres like a milisecond left after I read it and not everyone can read that fast (especially on newgrounds were a number of the population is like 12 xD)
- and possible more than one background, I mean they can't stand there the whole time, they need to move to make it more entertaining ^_^

I only hope that i helped more then pissed you off xD
I give it a 6/10 the way it is now, but it isen't that far from good enough :D

SS4FlameAlchemist responds:

Well, This is the most helpful review I have got so far. I always appreciate constructive criticism so I can improve. It was meant to be mostly fighting, and with the exception of the beginning dialogue up to the beginning of the fight, there wasn't supposed to be anything after that, but I got lazy. I am trying to figure out how to either put in a button to precede the text, or make it so hitting the space bar will continue it, like it my good friend neo fusion's flashes. As for more than one background, sorry, I just wanted to practice. Next one will have more.

Short version, I got lazy, and rushed it. The death of all great flash is lack of motivation!

[mikaze]

good...

but kinda short i think? but good, keep it up..

SS4FlameAlchemist responds:

Yeah, this was more for practice than anything else. My next animation should be a little longer, if I get around to it. Thanks for the review.

[vain12]

hmm rong omega

you used a diferent omega sprite then the original plus when he,s in that transformation he,s weaker

SS4FlameAlchemist responds:

That's your opinion.

[skeenie]

awesome concept, and pretty good animation. but i think you really need to work on your dialoge lol mebe have someone plauy editor for you? sprite movies revolve around what is said between characters. if that isnt up to par it sort of kills the momentum of the movie... all in all great movie though!

SS4FlameAlchemist responds:

Yeah. This was practice. And the dialogue was kinda cheesy. I'll keep that in mind for future flashes.

[Anwich]

it was pretty good

text was slow in some places, fast in others, animation was smooth, however, i didn't really like how it seemed so slow and unnatural, as though gravity and friction didnt effect them? or something along those lines bugged me, other than that, it was pretty good

SS4FlameAlchemist responds:

Don't understand what you mean by slow and unnatural. As far as the text goes, I plan on correcting that problem in my next submission. Thanks for the review.