Well now.
That video was perceptibly better than the previous. The animation started out similar to before then almost immediately became more fluid and real. I liked the way the hair fell during the "haircut scene" and the voice acting was much better without the microphone popping your plosives. Most of all the music. The music flowed through the entire piece perfect. I don't just say that. From the very beginning the music fit and the animation fit what the music sounded like. They were meshed perfectly. Well done. 4/5 9/10