Nice long tutorial
Well thought through, and nice and long...
But as you would of realised, i haven't given you a ten... Your graphics aren't amazing, which is why i took away i took away the three, your graphics are like what mine used to be like, so don't worry just keep practising and the day will come when you make a totally 'AMAZING' graphic. XD
Great explanation and well thought through... Keep up the good work. =D
Ok cool, I looked at your tutorials and I like the general appearance ALOT more than mine
Quite good but needs a bit refining.
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The variety of different tutorials really helps to set out a broad range of knowledge for beginners allowing them to experiment. Easy to read text and the viewer can easily distinguish between AS2 and instructions. The cursor was a nice addition and the tutorial had a fairly nice layout (easy to use).
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Important things such as onClipEvent();s needed to be explained, as that's extremely important for any flash game (which is what actionscript is normally used for). Some parts such as "Walls" and "Enemies" should have some explanation as they can be quite hard for beginners to understand.
Overall, this tutorial will give beginners some grasp on the basics of AS2 but the more difficult concepts need more depth. As for graphics, that isn't much of a concern to me but perhaps it's worth looking into. 64/100 B-
Very helpful crticism, thanks. Btw your flash submission "Jungle Level Beta Version 2" is brilliant
AS2
lol, that vid reminded me how much easier AS2 is than AS1
It was pretty good, but it isn't a tutorial if you just tell the viewer to copy and paste something.
Nice to see..
Nice tutorial for who wants to lern some basic things...
But i think noone will serch a tutorial at newgrounds O.o or just study by this "game"...