it's still not bad enough.
if you want to make something " so shitty it's funny" then you need to stop trying as much.
read more suirrelKing to inspire you're writing. long with no grammar.
and for the graphics use only colours and the Paintbrush tool to draw characters.
if there's backgrounds in the next one, try using just one with tinhy chansges to the scenery.
Minimalism is the key.
lmaO.
Ehhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Actually.....try to animate....and make stuff longer....hey...sorry...but it wasnt the best.
Read the author's comments!!!!!
The review:
While I didn't get any humor from it, I can see where you're trying to go with it. I felt it was a tad bit long and the music kinda took away from any humor. I'm sure others would get a kick out of it, but it's just not me. Don't take my rating seriously, I have criteria upon which I rate animations and since you did make it so "shitty" it does score low.
To everyone else:
***angry rant***
YOU ALL (there are a few exceptions) ARE SO STUPID THAT I HAD TO PUT THIS IN MY REVIEW. SERIOUSLY, IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT DON'T REVIEW IT! 99 TIMES OUT OF 100 IT'S NOT GOING TO MAKE IT ON ANY MAJOR LIST (Best of all time, Best of the week) SINCE MOST OF YOU WILL VOTE 1 OR 0 SO YOU'RE NOT GOING TO SEE IT AGAIN (unless you're a glutton for punishment). SO JUST LOOK AT IT VOTE YOUR SCORE AND NEVER LOOK AT IT AGAIN. THE FACT OF THE MATTER IS, THERE WILL BE CRAP/SPAM, SOMETIMES IT ACTUALLY GOOD, OTHER TIMES IT'LL BE TRUE CRAP/SPAM.
***angry rant***
Where there is good, there must be bad, that is a FACT. Most of the time the author is just trying to get the reaction most of you have shown so far. If you don't like this stuff, don't give the author the satisfaction. Sarcasm doesn't cover it up, it just means you're trying harder.
holy fucking shit. and here we finaly have one of the very few intelligent reviewers in this site. i commend you sir. everything you said in the second paragraph was true. fuck. your amazing. i love you this is one of the best reviews i have gotten in all time. good luck with anything you create here on newgrounds my good intelligent friend.
Humpf
Ah ah! Trash.
yes that's what is aid in my author comments. i know its bad.
Hmm...
I see you have a rather... intresting taste in music and visuals... It didn't suit my tastes so a winrar is NOT you. Good day to you sir :3
For real though, try to actually put some thought into your submissions and not spam the portal ok? bai bai. =3