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I liked this as much as I did the first one! :D Very cute, simple, clean, and very interesting. The artwork in the flash matched the theme of the whole flash, which I liked. I'd definitely like to see the third one. As for mistakes, you had a small grammar error. It's when Kevin is sitting under the clouds, he says "It's so hard to make friend...", and I'm sure you know where the error is. :D Any who, great job on this flash, I liked it a lot! I hope to see more.