Reviews for My First Animation! :P

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Nicely done

For a first flash, that was good. To bad no sound.

AutomaticToaster responds:

Thankies!

[IgnusIudicium]

Aww..

That's nice. I'd like to see more work, and improved animation in the future. The shaky animation style works well but I think you've overdone it a little here.
Sound and colour would also be nice.

But for a first piece, well done.

AutomaticToaster responds:

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[ChamberACR]

Good start.

You have potential.

AutomaticToaster responds:

Thanks as well!!

[PoketamaVideos]

Awesome

Could use some sound, good story, and great Edd, Ed 'n' Eddy style animation. 9/10 for no sound.

AutomaticToaster responds:

Thanks!!

[Yotam]

It was... alright, but that's about it

The FBF animation was pretty cool and I like the style, but it was also short and lacked color and sound.

You've got potential, and the animation's got charm, but this doesn't really cut it.

AutomaticToaster responds:

Thanks for commenting! I'll try to improve in future.