Not getting much better
It lost credibility when she announced love for him after only one night. Then it got clichéd with the whole light/dark realm thing and the creepy girl being controlled by a voice. Now the script is getting significantly corny and I hope the last episode can make up for lost ground.
Eh, not bad
not bad, but not brilliant. you had a good idea for a story line but the animation wasnt all that. keep at it, like the anime feel to it ^^
if you havnt seen it, watch some 'death note', you can pick up some good ideas from that anime, also try 'she the ultimate weapon' to get some ideas of emotion