Nice story, but...
...it could really use actual animation instead of focusing so much on motion tweening.
I mean, with the exception of you and your girlfriend stick personas hand moving up and down, aimlessly pressing the same button, there was no animation at all, just stale pictures using motion tween.
You could also have colored the RL world instead of only OoT's one, but I guess that could have been your choice as an artist.
Also, some voice acting might have worked out well, but the Zelda's music was fine too.
Overall, I liked it and you should keep focusing on animating in order to get better, but try to put more effort into it next time.