Two words
FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now that I have finished that.. The sound quality is greatly improved, the animation is clean. And above all, you are foreshadowing the Lord of the Darkness showing up with the little girl. I must see all of them. I must before I can call my year truly finished. Yes, I am becoming a little insane because of a great series, so what?
Purple eyebrows?
Is it just me or did Rain have purple eyebrows?
Anyways, I can see that your animation is improving. And so is your drawing (I absolutely adore Keta's hair). They don't look so bulky as they did in your much earlier episodes. Keep up the good work!
Damn you!
For making a whole series at one time, I am jealous as hell for that lol. I just thought I'd get that off my chest, I've wanted to do something like this ever since I started animating and I give you mad respect for pulling it off.
Now for the review. I think this is a good series, I can tell you have skill. The drawings are nice and clean, and the story...makes sense... this is a rare delight here on NG. The voice acting is solid, though the sound quality is a bit unpleasant.
My main complaint is the animation, there is a god-awful amount of tweening here, looks like about 85% of the animation, and I know why. I know everything in this series is already animated, but for future reference, you need to find balance between drawing detail and quality animation. I notice you putting a lot of shading and such into the characters, which looks nice, but I can tell it's making you a little bit afraid to approach the fBf and it it tends to make some shots look a little cheap, even though they're just talking. I really think that you should simplify the detail on the keyframes just a little, whether it be the character designs or the shading so that you won't be afraid to actually "animate" the actions of the characters. But otherwise this is pretty cool what you did here making a whole saga, I'm completely jealous!
Thanks a lot dude! I totally agree, I really did do way too much tweening in this series. My new animations (yet to upload on NG) have cut down on character detail and focus on fBf animation more. Thanks for the advice and support, it means a lot! Check out my new stuff when I finally get around to finishing it and let me know what you think :)
It was a sad but powerful story
I felt sorry for the guy, being killed by his own mother that loved him, and not realizing it until he learned after he was offer the deal. That has to be the worst way to die, not knowing that you made be sleeping, and then you're dead, and you don't know how you died, and that day you just had was your last. Poor guy. The story was a little confusing, but it made sense at the end as to why he's on earth. But he still doesn't tell us why he killed those innocent people and made that little girl go crazy now, which I bet is going to try to kill him, and that will be bad if that happens. I hope this series has a happy ending. I'm the kind of person who hates seeing endings where it's not happy, just sad and painful to watch. Well, I guess I have to find out in the next episode.
Well played miss.
I'll be sure to check out the rest of the series to see what i missed, you have my respects for all the work you put into this flash.