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Reviews for "Raptor Burgers"

Very cool

Very cool! You've got a lot of style, and I must admit that I'm partial to pretty much anything with raptors in it.

I can only give you a couple pieces of advice. The first of which is that you should work on your hands a bit more. Everything else has kind of an angular, hyperstylized feel to it, whereas the hands have like... Mickey Mouse gloves or something like that on them. Keep with the style. A great piece of advice I was given was that when people look at your animation, one of the biggest things they're going to judge you by is the faces and the hands. The faces, while nothing special, are fine. The hands could use a little bit of work however. I'm not saying they need to be completely realistic, but something more angular would probably fit the bill.

My second piece of advice would be to add in a little more FBF. This would come in handy, particularly when something is changing direction. Just flipping the symbol is unimpressive and distracting. Adding in a couple of frames would really help even things out and make the animation a bit less choppy.

But besides that, stylistically, your piece is awesome, your choice of music fits perfectly and the plot is twisted and funny. Very entertaining!

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

I see, I see.

:D.

cool

this is pretty awsome.

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

;).

Very awesome.

Well animated, good music, good story. Congratulations. I hope you reach front page with this. :)

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

:)!

Aww fkc yeah.

The animation overall is great, the music went well with the flow of the animation and everything seemed perfect for me. YOu got a 10/10 5/5 from me, keep up da good stuff yo, and bag me a few burgers as well lol.

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

:D.

this was great

hahhah funny and cute. Great movie

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

;).