Hm....
It was crap! Just kidding.
It was good for a first animation. The music was perfect for this kind of flash.
Along the line, the graphics were alright.
It was cute in a way.
But ya, the color for the flash is good. Not the best but good.
8/10
5/5
That's all from me.
~Taro326
Thank you. I actually liked my colorss haha. but yeah the music is the best to me. thanks though. :)
Um ótimo começo...
Great start in flash animation, keep the good work, this can be another series!
See ya!
I hope it does become one! =) thanks for your kind words
also
i wish there would be a Pirate collection! im really working towards that. ;D
A good start
This little flash is cute and shows some skill, I give you some hints because I think you have potential:
- drawings: you have your own style and it's nice, but you have to develop it a little further. Hands are "loaf like" and force you to add hints like "shaking". Try harder, I think you can do better than that. 6/10
- animation: simple but well done, the unconscious frame adds something funny to it. 9/10
- music/sounds: the music it's just perfect and fits the flash, on the other way there are no sounds and again you added hints for that. 7/10 as an average.
- plot/idea: a funny little story full of ideas, the yar sign instead od sos is wonderful, the pirate Pete makes me laugh, just a question: the treasure they trade is real or it's a pirate's trick? 10/10
Overall 8/10, I will wait for your next flash matey, marooned or not.
Thanks for all of your kind words and critiques! I love a little constructive criticism :D
Yeah I know my art needs a bit of improvement. I'm trying to work on it. My hands always suck though..I call them muffinhands. I kinda like them XD
Heh. As for the treasure, you'll have to stick around to find out ;D
Y'ARR
Cute.
I like the direction so far. Awaiting further story with EXTREME ANTICIPATION AND EXPECTATIONS.
Oh wow the pressure's on. Thanks though. I'm waiting on yours too :P
**Great First Movie**
I think the cartoon is great the way it is, but the intro screen needs a start button or something. At first glance with the lack of sound and animation for the title screen I feared the worst, but it turned out to be a cute and well done little flash. Bravo! Hope to see more.
Yeah it was hard enough to figure out how to use the preloader with Toon Boom. It's not flash so there are slightly less tutorials...and by slightly less i mean close to none. :P But I'll keep that in mind! thanks =)