nice
good animation and vivid colors gives this all my 5!!
Reviews for "Newgrounds Ad"
Erbmaster responds:
Thanks!!!
Very clever ...
Not much to really comment on here ... I liked the graphics, and the idea was very good, but you did misspell "you're", which does need to be fixed. A bit of colour would be good on the eyes too; maybe a background, the shirt, and the parachute? Other than that, very well done.
4/5 and 8/10, I love the idea :P
Erbmaster responds:
Yeah I'm gonna fix that and go through the painful task of adding color to it, thanks for the comment.
huh
A tad lengthy, but not bad!
Erbmaster responds:
Yeah also kinda big for an ad, but oh well, Thanks for the comment.....
Not too bad!
I like it! Only thing I would suggest, is changing the "Your" to "You're", other than that, looks damn good!
Erbmaster responds:
Yeah sorry about that, I hadn't noticed it. thanks for commenting
nice
I like the idea and the style of this animation. Yeah, just change the your to "you're" like everybody said, also a bit of colour would be cool, Like colour the background or make the newgrounds store part stand out more. I still like the pencil-like style of the animation too. My favourite part is when it shows the tankman with the NG T-shirt on.
As for that review by "Deomas". I don't think he read Tom's post, I think the "our" should be kept there.
Erbmaster responds:
thanks for reviewing, I'm definitely fixing it up now, It should be updated in a couple of days......