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even tho your just 12 try to make teh graphics better just practise allot and take more time before posting its better to make 1 great one then 20 shity ones
and try to make something logical instead of random shit passing by
Reviews for "Over 9000!!!!!!!!!"
That was some pretty bad animation
But the song and idea was good.
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ye so indeed it wasn't so great, but in my opinion age does make a difference, your young and you have not a lot of experience in flash or animating. But that's no reason to be so harsh. First of all you should maybe practice the basic movements of ur characters more, and just focus urself on one paricular character, so just draw one (even a stick figure is just fine) and have fun with that one and make him do different things that way you'll get more the hang of flash. You can add music and backgrounds later. btw there are some gr8 tutorials here on NG, however as ull get better (i'm sure u will if u just keep practicing :) you'll find that it's necessary to "redraw the same god damn stick figure" if u want ur characters to make certain movements look decent.
anyhoo don't give up and just keep trying ;)
Not bad... but not good.
When I first came to this page I thought it would be an animation all about DBZ and over 9000... but I was wrong. Although the beginning and a bit in the end of the movie was DBZ related, it really wasn't. It did include some popular characters, like Alien Hominid and Angry Faic, it was... well, too abstract. The real point of posting on Newgrounds, at least in my opinion, is to provide for the entertainment for others. This animation wasn't very interesting for me at all, I'm sorry. Although I like the song, most of the animations were just simple and bland motion tweens. There were some parts I enjoyed, such as the stick figure, but the rest made the whole movie uninteresting. I understand that you worked hard on this and are proud of your work, but this was overall not something that I would find entertaining at all.
In terms of criticism, the thing that I found so boring was the long scenes of the same thing over and over again. The examples that stand out most include what I believe to be Buu moving his arms up and down, a gray blob breakdancing, and the Angry Faic scene. These are just too repetitive and can easily make the audience lose interest... unless something were to happen that breaks the repetitiveness of the scene. That would make it somewhat more entertaining. The other thing that needs to be criticized is the whole concept of the movie overall... What I, and almost everyone who viewed this thought the movie would be was a DBZ-like movie with DBZ characters and somewhere in it there is "It's over 9000!!!" Instead it was a very strange and abstract music video (if that is an appropriate term to describe this) that had very little to do with DBZ at all.
On a side note... reading the Author Comments above... it, well, seems a little bit too angry and unprofessional. What bugs me the most is the lack of punctuation. It makes the whole thing EXTREMELY irritating to read, and makes it seem like you just put crappy flash on Newgrounds without any effort or care, just to clog up and spam the system. At least, that's what it seems like to me. For everyone to take you seriously, please use punctuation in what you write and try not to blame the reviewers for something that they would not necessarily do. It is one thing to request a meaningful, constructive, and respectful review... but you just come off as being too angry towards us reviewers. Some examples of which are your use of "god damn same" and "if you're so perfect". Those kinds of word choices only infuriate the reviewers and make them want to give you bad reviews. I, for one was appalled by what you wrote in the comments. Just chill out, and if you truly know that one of your flash animations us good, then your reviewers will do the same as well!
Hirachi responds:
and how is it look not effort i used atuaclly charatcer instead of just drawing stick figures. theres nothing wrong with being random i guess people dont get there are lots of random stuff on the web people are like worshipping all im saying is what ever happen to putting a nice polite comment like "it wasnt that great you could use some improvements on your flash next time trie harder" now its like"you suck go kill your selse i fucked your mom you should quit animating"
practise
well i think evryones beggings looked like this, just tht most dont upload it.
i like the almost psychedelic looks of it.
putting a bit more effort into the figures wont kill you either