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Reviews for "Paper's edge"

Very cool!

This is a really clever little animation. Moving around your desk through different objects (multiple post-its, rulers, erasers, etc) really separated this from other hand-drawn animations on Newgrounds (of which there are few) and helped to sort of break the fourth wall.

Erasing every frame is sort of a pain and looks a tiny bit sloppy, although I honestly think it added a little to the overall animation. If you want to do this cleaner in the future, get a pad of acetate. It's clear plastic sheets that you can write on with Sharpies and other markers like that. You can get acetate at most art supply stores; I think it's like 10 bucks a pad. A little expense, but I'm sure it would improve your work :)

Visuals and audio synced really well in this video. The sound was kind of low quality, but I can see the file size is pretty big and you probably couldn't upgrade it with NG's file size constraints.

Congratulations on making a really solid bit of animation. This seems pretty likely to win an award, which it really does deserve. Hope your next piece is even more detailed and fun to watch!

stickbob123 responds:

(Thank God (i am a strong christian) that i got back on to the computer for you review, i read the whole thing!) thanks a lot! i will definitley look into acetate and see if this can improve my work! Always trying to learn new things and newgrounds is chuck full of it! (why i basically left youtube) thanks again!

Very Nice

Very smooth and well done. You can tell that there was erasing involved just by looking, and, I don't know whether or not you wanted it to show, but I think that actually makes it look cooler.

wow very niiice :)

very creative stuff, i really enjoyed watching a lot :) maybe you could add a random fight scene? i think that would be nice also.

Hope to see more of your work :) 9/10 4/5

Wow.

This bleeds creativity and general awesomeness. Can't wait for #2 (which I can guarentee will be awesome) Nice work!

stickbob123 responds:

Thanks ted!

Quite impressive!

I'm a big fan of these cartoons that have a heavy use of stop motion to create this effect. It was nice of you to make a version strictly for Newgrounds and mention your YouTube profile. I was particularly impressed by the eraser that showed up and then exploded. I was also entertained by all of the "P"'s you put in your description. I'm not quite sure if you should add Ps or Ss to that. Anyway, while not one of my favorites, this obviously took a lot of effort to make and was able to tell a good story in the process.

stickbob123 responds:

Thank you for ur exact opinion...it's always appreciated