Great style :)
but like carl said i think Tom's eye should have like a slight skwint where his cheek overlaps it if you know what i mean.
oh and does Dave know that all people evolved from monkeys/apes (as now generally excepted) and that ALL the desendants of man came from Africa. So technically the white people are the odd ones we are the ones that changed from the norm. (by the way i'm white :P)