My summary;
A decent attempt: +2
Bad animation: -3
Acceptable voice act: +2
A couple of ok jokes: +2
many horrible 'jokes':-2
bad narrative techniques (text slides (NEVER USE!)):-4
result: -3, aka 0/10, 0/5.
sorry mate, didn't make the cut.
Reviews for "Ghostrider Animation"
JustHannah responds:
thanks for the review anyway, it will help towards my report
w00t! Bike of doom!
I liked it. Pretty funny :)
Add a play & replay button.
JustHannah responds:
i ran out of time by about 10 minutes, it had to be uploaded and i didnt get the chance to make a play and replay button as i had wanted.
thank you very much for the review
Just some thoughts
Add more detail to your animating. Not the artwork but the actual animating, you need more frames. When the character is walking if you do not want to animate the legs at least animate the arms. A simple back and forth motion will do, you can even tween that. Also review your work before you submit and make sure the dimensions are correct, you don't want your work to by cut off by white void! Haha. My suggestion to you would to be to use movie clips more often. You could use them to give the fire on Ghost Rider's head life for example. Good luck on your future submissions!
JustHannah responds:
thank you for the helpful freview. i really appreciate it