Good work
Like the guy before me said, it's not the best, but it's good. The movement is slow, though and in the first level, I found myself hitting my head on the underside of one of the platforms. The physics, I guess, are alright. The character could be animated and actually have legs, but it's your first try. Not bad at all. Much better than some of the other shit I've seen around here.
Its ok...
Not one of the best games that I have ever played but its alright for your first flash game.
Keep it up! =)
Okay.
*thinks to self* Geez, no one understands how to use constructive criticism...
moving on..
A good first attempt. Of course, it's nothing like your average flash game platformer. But at least you have the idea grasped. And it's always good to start with something, rather than nothing at all, they always say practice makes perfect. Keep up your work and you'll be doing fine in no time. To quote Alexman159 on a couple things, you could try testing out some of the things he's listed, etc. Also, try to take a bit more time on the game (sorry if you did actually spend a substantial amount of time on it). I'm sure if you at least try to make a decent game, even if the levels turn out bad, you'll still get a better review from your viewers. And as I said before, practice DOES make perfect. Also, It helps to watch a few animation tutorials here and there, to learn how the basic mechanics of flash work and how to get all the 'bells and whistles.'
Overall, a good first attempt, had it not been a first attempt my review wouldn't have been as..."soft" for lack of a better word. Keep up the good work, and you'll be pumping out quality content in no time.
Cheers.
Thank you for your criticism, I am keeping all these things in mind.
This was an alright try at a first game.
You should be confident with making more levels. You'll probably do fine.
Thank you, and I guess I might add more levels...at some point.
sry dude
glitchy platforms poorly drawn backgrounds with poorly drawn characters n environment . only 3 levels all of which are wayyyyyyy to easy the controls were so simple they may have just come from some random tutorial that came off the portal and on top of that all the game wasnt finished im not trying to be mean but common at least try
Yes, I know, and in the future I hope to have it looking much better.