Well.
I wasn't sure what the plot was in this flash. Regardless, here's my take on it.
Graphics: 6/10
I guessed based on the description of this movie that you didn't put too much effort into it. Still I was mildly entertained by the odd man wearing a kitty hat that danced. Try to make it a little smoother next time.
Audio: 9/10
This is where I thought this flash might actually send a chill up my spine. The creepy music definetly synced up with the movie. However the techno and the creepy music ended up cancelling each other out(One starts playing during the other, and is like that for a second or two before the original stops). The audio was good.
Overall: 6/10
If you had kept this as a thriller it would've gotten a higher score out of me. Nothing really impressive in this one but still worth a look if you're into random stuff. You have promise to make a creepy/thriller sort of flash. I'm sure if you took your time, polished up the artwork and fixed the audio you could make a hit.
Decent Job.
P.S. If you submit what you call "crap" to the portal, odds are people are going to assume it is without even caring to watch it and just give it low reviews. Give your flash a fair shot! You never know what people would think. Look at Jerry Jackson.