Rina Chan, you ruined it.
Rina Chan you are a terrible writer, all your jokes are bland and predictable, even worse is that you literally make inside jokes about your own movie, your literally reusing jokes because people thought they were funny once. The big gay dance isnt even fucking funny anymore, you ruined it by reusing it a second time and it jut shows how pathetic of a writer you are if you have to reuse jokes to trail off the some what original joke you made in your first one. I hope you will someday make something that will redeem yourself.
Animation wise I dont have any complaints, Kirb actually made a good intro that was the only part I thought was funny, But I did like the look of Callums graphics, they had a nice refereshing look to them but for everyone else the animation was either flawed or needs improving.
4 points for the animation, you lose the rest because you just wasted all these talented animators time.