I could not BELIEVE the twist!
I'm not gonna be a spoilsport and tell the end, but I will say it's surprising! Great job.
I could not BELIEVE the twist!
I'm not gonna be a spoilsport and tell the end, but I will say it's surprising! Great job.
Good
That was really good. nice job. I loved the story & the weird idea of H.E.L.L. Nice job.
... more like me
he is like me a twist here a twist there
great story line!
WOW that was awesome i liked the twist at the end i give it a 10/10!!!!
that was scary, but cool
that would be cool if hell was really like that lol, 10/10 really good story line