that was great!
hey, just because it was for school, i hope this isnt the end.
i expect a great series to come from this!
that was great!
hey, just because it was for school, i hope this isnt the end.
i expect a great series to come from this!
Great job!
Excellent job, very good animation and character design. Definitely one of the best storylines I have seen in awhile. My two points of criticism would be on the end of the story and on your walk cycles. The walk cycles from behind seem a bit unrealistic, it is not that the character is a shadow but rather that there is no movement in the legs. Perhaps even just moving the character up and down a bit would be enough to give the appearence of a foward walk cycle. As far as the story, I think the scene where there is an error in the computer system a "A few hours earlier" subtitle or somthing along those lines would be nice to help clarify what exactly happened. Overall excellent animation! Keep up the good work!
Yep, I've noticed that as well.
Thanks for watching! :D
WTF?!?!
When people like you put awesome stuff like this on Newgrounds, it just doesn't fit in with the crap. 5/5, 10/10.
Awesome
even better than what i expected (which was a horror flash) and i loved the twist at the end
DAMN!
That was a great twist at the end!! Very well done for a one-week deadline, too!
5/5, 9/10