Nice
Good job. Nice animations, good sound quality, you actually made your own pre-loader (bonus points :D it impresses me when people put in that extra effort, even if it's not major)
Anyways, you did a really good job. A couple little things need to be improved, but it's nothing too much. (Mainly, some of the text needed to be a little clearer, but it was still readable)
So good job, and keep working with flash! Of course you know that you get better the more you practice! :D