Nice
It was pretty good, nice drawings and animation was pretty sketchy but with style. Need abit of colour in it but apart from that it was good! nice voice acting
Reviews for "Max and Emma 2"
Sorrygirl99 responds:
yay~
Thank you! :D
A lot of people have been telling me to put color, so i will put color in the next episode :D
Good
well this was better buuut the victim #3 wasnt really a victim he was more a... non-victim?
Sorrygirl99 responds:
ik, but...
in my mind, he was always a victim.
:D nice!
Nicely done! :P Really liked it! Hoping to get a new mic soon >.<
Aaanyway... cool animation! Creepy dark powered girl part was funny as hell XD
Sorrygirl99 responds:
I TOTALLY AGREE!!!
oh! And thank you for your voice :P
haha
it was good, animation was good for a 09:er and the jokes were pretty cool.
But it still lacks color and real artwork, I'd love if you went a little outside the whole anime style, you can keep it, but try and add some original stuff too.
Overall it was pretty good :)
Sorrygirl99 responds:
ok... :P
"Please don't commit suicide Mr sad man"
It has that fun, random crazyness vibe to it. I really like the dialog in this. I can't wait for more.
A few things that needed work are -
voice volume was all over the place. I get that you were trying to show the distance from who was talking, but it made some parts really hard to understand.
The voice timing to the animation was off by about 1 1/2 seconds. I tried changing the quality and reloading it, so I don't think it was just me. This is the biggest turnoff for this flash.
As-is, I think this flash is a solid 3/5. If you can fix these issues, 4/5 or better.
Sorrygirl99 responds:
ok, ya.... i'll try to fix that with the next flash i post