Ouch...
What a pain ;D Poor thing... but it was great ;D
Reviews for "Patchman:Simple Pleasures"
That was great
Really funny man.
thats not a good way to start a morning
i Lol'ed at the theres a visine for that part
its another classic joke
its alot like happy tree friends exept no blood
nice
nice movie but it's not "Suitable For All Audiences"
RiverJordan responds:
Pff, there was no blood :P no graphic violence at all XD
cute!
there is potential here. while your character has no insane amount of detail (which is perfectly fine) he is recognizable (which is good).
the animation seemed a bit odd. the frame-by-frame parts that were traditionally animated seemed to have much thicker linework than the parts where you just tweened body parts around. There were some places here where you were trying to make your character "swoosh" and stretch and smear to show fast movement, like when he knocked things off the tablet.
I think you could go alot crazier with this sort of thing.
It almost seemed liked you were afraid to take it too far.
But this sort of character is the perfect vehicle for taking it to far. He's a patchwork blob! Have him really FLAIL!
Also good choice in music. Not enough people have been exposed to the rock opera grandeur that is the Trans Siberian Orchestra.
Also, and this pertains to the let-yourself-go-crazy thing i wrote above, this seems like the sort of character that is funnier the more its injured. Like a Wile E Coyote but much cuter.
Hot sauce in eyedrops, while a cute concept is a bit nonsensical if only because there FAR WORSE and FAW MORE HAZARDOUS fluids that can be mistaken for eyedrops.
Hell, there are drinking games devoted to squirting hot sauce in one's eye!
i've lost track.
what was i talking about i cant remember. IGNORE ME.
RiverJordan responds:
People find this review Helpful! And so do i!
Now personally i'm not "scared" to take it too far, this idea started out with me saying "there's a visine for that" in school waaaaay too much and people were annoyed, and then i drew a little cartoon of a guy with a toothpick in the eye, and it ended up as this.
Already i've planned for 2 more patchman flashes, one he does fail hardcore, but another its... a different kind of fail :P You'll see i guess.
FLAILING WILL HAPPEN!
Thanks for the review! :D Everything that you've said is taken into consideration :D