haha
this seems like something happy harry would do. replacing eye drops with hot sauce.... i don't think anyone would do that....
Reviews for "Patchman:Simple Pleasures"
I like it
Well done Jordan! You have a lot of talent!
gmg haha
yes i love it xD
toast
it can realy...ouch, you know :D
Great Stuff
I really like what you've done here. It was pretty nice. Now here comes the constructive criticism: The character Patchman is missing a little something. (Personally, I think you should make him a little shorter, because his face is a bit too juvenile to be placed on that long a body, but, like I said, that's just me.) Another thing, I know you were probably busy, and I know these things take a lot of work, but next time, plan out a good story to go with your character. Trust me, having a good story makes things all the worthwhile, and it makes your film that much more memorable. This one was a bit formulaic, but I know it's your first one, and you've done a great job. The animation is surprisingly smooth, which is very nice. Oh, and, make sure your titles introduce your character (i.e.: Patchman - There's a Visine for That) or something. To tell the truth, I still have no idea why you calle dit "Simple Pleasures"...) But, other than that, great job. I hope to see more of you guys and Patchman. Good luck.
RiverJordan responds:
This one started out as a lil joke with friends about the visine commercials, its called simple pleasures because having salt on toast is a simple pleasure, Patchman will continue looking the way he does because thats how my friend andy drew him originally and i promised i'd keep him the same, more of patchman in the future, and i don't want to call any of them with "patchman" in the title, its just a quirk :p
I hope that summed up everything in a single sentince, but don't think of it as me just rejecting your review. . . i see how it could come off that way but i really do appreciate the comments and i'll keep the things about the story and what not in mind :D