mmm...
it basicly stands out for all the flashy lights and background music, but animation wise it consisted basicly of cheap tweens and fast looking two frame animations (like your smoke). Your walk cicle looked cheesy. I think you did a great job with the colors and all the backgrounds, and it would have been great to see some frame by frame animations mixed into all the great spects you showed here, or in any case just work on making your tweens look better. Storywise, i think it was entertaining. Great Job!