Daily third!?
Oh man, you poor unlucky guy. That was just fantastic. I am blown away.
I mean, sure there were things I could point out, but it would only be nitpicking. If anyone didn't like this video, they're not going to like much on Newgrounds.
Color-wise, I'm astounded you say you have problems with color. I honestly made a mental note to compliment you on both choice of shots (very professional) and your choice of color. A limited palette of reds and yellows, and a reverse palette of blues and whites worked beautifully. In fact I'm going to watch it again to help me understand why I think your colours worked so well.
All that, and I didn't even fully understand the ending. Well done.