Reviews for Skeleton Jack

[Jae]

Listen!

I loved your ability to tell an action packed story, man. I think you have a real nack for making a very "epic" looking film. A very nice action style and it works nicely.

Here's the thing. To really become great you need to now focus on raw animation. No more TWEENS unless you're using them to pan around dynamically. The way you told your story was awesome and it nearly outweighed the lazy tweens. I think this is the reason your movie did well. Imagine if you animated it more stictly, though. What you need to do is draw keyframes and throw in some dynamic poses and altered angles. Distorted depth and the works. Learn to make your perspective and poses, then animate those keys. Once that's done, inbeTWEEN them... not using TWEENS :P

I liked your storytelling abilities but I think you need to work on your animation and have more fun with that aspect.

Hope this helps, dawg.

NightShadowTWO responds:

thanks bud. i really do need to brush up on my fbf skillz. thanks for the tips!

[TerroistPancake]

awsome ness

great animation skills i gotta give yah props

[Lark-Ninja-gamer]

OMG I actualy found somthing! and my random review

yeah I actualy found 1 thing wrong. after he wakes up form the big blast the first blink we see him do, where his eyes were goes red for like a second and sometimes he is missing his spine. other then that I did not see anything wrong with this. if it continous into a series yay and if not then IM SAVEING THIS! you did very well considering the colors are slightly off in your head (color blind is seeing ONLY black, white and gray).

The music was a nice choise for the animation and the sounds where also synced perfectly. The end had the best music for the situation and a really nice explanition of why he was protecting the "INCREDBIL MUSICAL CUDDLE FISH!" My question is why did Jack want it in the first place. Still the coloring was (in the very high up leaugs) delightlyfuly simple looking. Reminded me alot of samurai Jack (that show was probaly a bit of an inspration for this animation) and I liked that so I liked this. Im also wondering what grade you got for this?

Look at me ramble on. in finishing I will say it is a very nicely made animation with 1-2 mistakes, nicely tuned sound and a cute yet exciteing story that keeps me watching it over and over again. I hope you can answer some of my questions and I also hope you have a great day.

8/10 just to get your attection and the fact giveing it a 10 is just to fan boyishing (oh and also that little mistake I pointed out) but you also get a 5 ^^

NightShadowTWO responds:

well i'm glad you liked it. I still am unable to tell which part of the animation you are talking about. i am unable to find a part where jack is missing his spine.

thanks for watching!

[MASTERXJC]

I enjoyed this movie

Nice job man I hope you make more I'm giving you a 10 cuz your cool

[Jimtopia]

Very awesome.

I've got to be honest, I clicked on that "Play" button not expecting much, but was pleasantly surprised! Amazing work, I loved every second of it. You have quite the knack for 2D animation, I must say.