preety good
short but awesome
Reviews for "Short Stickman Combo"
Nice!
Too short, but you have potential to be a GREAT flash artist. Try making it longer, kind of like a Xiao Xiao animation, if you remember those. 4/5, man. You earned it.
Taking a good deal into consideration
For a first animation this is not half-bad although there is not a lot here, you took me by surprise when you reflected the sticks on the ground. The animation was also very smooth and the time frame control was a nice touch. Overall this is good for a first try, I naturally recommend a story and preloader in your next animation.
Good job, you have the potential to make something great I'll keep watch for your next flash(if you decide to do anymore). Good luck.
SkatingRobert responds:
Thanks for the comment, but I have to tell you this is my first FINISHED stickman combo, I made more before, but didn't submit them because of the high epic-fail factor but I have more work on my old account, FreeRunRobert, search it up on newgrounds.
Since it got hacked and I stopped FreeRunning (rofl) I made this new account.
R.
Pretty Good
It was pretty good, but how does the purple person stay parallel the whole time?
SkatingRobert responds:
Whatch frame by frame using the frame by frame control panel, he doesn't have the time to fall because he gets hit again..
R.
Needs improvement.
Ok well, let's start with the good points.
- I liked the reflection of the stickmen on the ground.
- I liked the sounds with every hit he made.
- It was clear that they were fighting. Lol [ I saw a movie today in which they were supposed to be fighting but it looked like NOTHING ]
- The frame controlling option was nice
Now here are some things that may need improvement :
- Some kind of background action music would be awesome!
- About the frame controlling, there weren't that much frames and I didn't really see the use of it in a short movie like this.
- More action wouldn't hurt anyone.
- It was a bit simple, almost seemed like an animated gif if there wouldn't be any sounds.
~ try improving our work and you'll do great!
SkatingRobert responds:
Okay, I will really keep your points in my mind.
But, about the background music, it's just a short combo which was in the name, so that isn't a #1 need, about the frame controlling, before I controlled stick animation I always wondered how the good animator's did it, and I was like, w/e I'll let some noobs see how I make/made this, so that's no points, about the "not much frames" I said it was short, about the more action the name is "short stickman combo, and the same argument about the simpleness.
I don't want to say that it's perfect but the most of your "bad points" arent really helpfull/powerfull.
R.