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Reviews for "=aDarknessInApril="

not bad

i did't get it , but animation was nice.

sad but good

its really good but theres no words.....sad cause everyone he knew is dead....real good work though!

Alright

It was a good serious take,well made and did alot to influence less happy thoughts...Though there are something that could use changing one for instance the blinking scene's....the eyelids moved far too slowly(while that does add to the whole of the animation) it just became annoying after the first couple of times,Second the eyelids didn't actually close and hence you could see the scene change which destroyed the mood somewhat.Your animation style fitted the animation admirably though some more hand movement would have helped such as the shaking being more apparent the first time you saw it and after/

I'll not criticize any further as it was a very good piece and i can see the work put in it.
good Job and a great take on Pico.

smooth.

1.)I absolutely loved the old comic book style animations
2.)Great song choice, really set the somber mood.
3.)the "blinking" to change scenes was a good idea, but the eyelashes were SO ANNOYING, really hated the eyelashes. You lose points there.

If it weren't for the editing style this would be a 10/10

Thats a different take on it.

Well Im not a fan of mushy, cliche scenes where the characters are shown as always very fragile and sad, sad, beings. That said this wasnt so bad. It was certainly a different take on it because I expected Pico to be shooting postal coworkers when he's 40. He seemed pretty happy in the original to take out the goth kid/freak antagonists. The art was nice, I like your take on Pico. Seems they fed him well after the massacre. My suggestion to you would be to add some balance because I found myself distracted at some slower points. Maybe if the memories were shorter and faster, with just sound from the school or some faster music it would make me follow the plot closer. The music was fine, but it would be better if it changed at some time. It goes on and on through the whole thing making it seem like a music video really.

At the end Id like to also add that those were some fucking weird eyelashes. Oh and please change the title without the =. Its the title, its supposed to be grand. Overall: positive. Peace.