Not bad
I'm sure that idea's been done to death, and probably better, but I haven't seen it, so I can't judge it for that.
For what it was was good, maybe a background would've been good.
Reviews for "Ant Comeback"
Bloodspill234 responds:
I haven't seen a remake of this before in my life. But I acknoledge your suspician!
Haha
Compared to a lot of the new flash that's been posted just recently, that actually humored me. The animation was decent, and the end was pretty ironic. Overall it was pretty good. Nice work.
Bloodspill234 responds:
Thank you!
Hi Joby
In the interest of feedback, for a "qiuck meaningless short" it was pretty good. It wasn't just a bunch of thoughtless stick figures killing eachother, and you used ironic humor, that for the energy invested, was rather entertaining. I would say that you show potential. Not really providing you with any ideas, but in the interest of encouragement, I think you could do well in making more. Good luck!!
Bloodspill234 responds:
OK, thanx!
And hello... chupacabra...
Good animation, too short for solo.
Now, don't get discouraged by my low rating. The animation is pretty good, and the idea was interesting, but the problem is (and I'm sure you realise this) that this clip alone is too short to be a submission of it's own.
My suggestion is that if you're aiming to make quick shorts, at least put a few togheter and then submit as one.
Other than that, good work. Perhaps a background would make it better? Do that next time.
I saw make a bunch of these :)
Bloodspill234 responds:
Thanx!
It was... ok?
First thing I asked myself was, "Is this this guy's first flash?", because if it is I suppose it isn't too bad considering that fact.
Improvements:
Use smaller brush sizes for the anthill to add more detail
Make the head blow up more realistically
Shape the blood.
Loganatrux
Bloodspill234 responds:
Yes sir...