Reviews for A Bid For Freedom

[NinjaWo-man]

Nice Job

this is so wonderful. I enjoyed it a lot. the illustrations are well done, and the colors, and style fit well and are good. The monologue... aww, I loved it! When I heard the voice of the narrator, and the way that he speaks, the first thing that popped in my head was the Legacy of Kain series, it's a video game, which has a brilliant story script by the way, It's just like it. the narrators voice is a mix of Kain and Raziel, with the way he speaks and choices of words, but like I said before Nice job! I loved it!

[Draggo]

I'm in awe.

That was a truly glorious creation you bestowed on us. The storytelling was clear, witty and understandable, the art style reminded me so much of those old watercoloured books that I read when I was a kid, and the story was so deep I had to take spelunking equipment.

Thankyou.

AdamCook responds:

Hahaha, that's a great metaphor that I'm kicking myself for not putting in!
I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Thank you, too, for the review!

[MlKE]

this is beautiful

keep up the good work, I love this

[Infuritaion]

Purely original

You are truly amazing. Its nice to see some of this buried amongst the crap. It was witty, creative, and beautiful. The descriptive words hit home for me, for I thrive off of the deep, descriptive works of literature. Its quality was great as well. No static voice, and the art was something out of an artist's canvas.

Great job!

[Csonns]

Very good

Well put together, art work was great.
Interesting story if anything.
The ending was a bit of a let down but it was unexpected to say the least.
All in all it's a very well put together story that could very easily be published into even a child's book.

Well done.