Awesome story
By far the best piece on the front page. This should have won the daily feature. It definitively deserves more than third place. Simply fantastic from the audio to the illustrations to the story. Couldn't be better.
Reviews for "A Bid For Freedom"
that was just great
I love the originallity of this. This is some serious art. keep it up
really good
I really liked it. it proved to be funny in some parts, ex."I aim myself aimlessly", "She shone like the center of an oreo", and my favorite"Oh...well...good cause...Africa...um...9/11...never forget and all that...Yes We Can". The whole morel of the story seemed like and reminded me of a Donkey Kong/Mario mixture in Great Brittan. Good job at the reading,sound effex,and drawings.
This is intriguing!
Not what one typically expects from this site, but I loved the concept of an interactive storybook. The narration made it. Great kudos to your illustrator as well, beautiful work!
All the modern references (oreos, youtube, etc) were an interesting fit with the rest of the "proper" vocabulary, but I felt like it worked. :) I had a problem with one of your similies though... "as blue as dophin tears" made me cringe. :P
I hope to see more well developed and beautiful work like this!
The weather lolzzzzzzzzz!
"I'm just saying, it could be worst." Awesome stuff-- great twist too!