The control screen has a typo.
You're, not your. Learn to spell.
Not to mention the fact that computer chips didn't exist in the 1950s, and really didn't get very sophisticated until the 90s. Certainly, there is still no chip small enough that it could be fit in the brain that would have enough processing power to control people. Not to mention the fact that a hell of a lot of people would have to agree before such operations could be done, because it would be impossible to keep secret from the doctors involved.
Your scripting for the voice acting could be improved. A lot. The intro was pretty horrible.
Apart from the total lack of immersive or story quality, the game is pretty good. Work out some of the bugs, though (Crashed when I press down+A and was sliding, had constant 100% addrenaline in the second part, some other minor stuff). A pretty standard platformer, though the 'tricks' could be scrapped. The controls were not too bad (wall running and jumping off a wall took a little getting used to). The attacks could be done a little bit better (The character standing there very slowly tapping the enemy? Needs more speed and force to it).
In short, decent but nothing special.