Gabriel..
I mean, he's a great madness animator and probably a good animator all around, but I find that all of his segments are usually a star wars 30 second long contribution. I really loved all of L3pra's, and Gabriel's too, but just cut down on the length of your parts. If you take time off of adding length and make it shorter with more effort (not saying you need any) but then it definitely will look the best and smoothest of all the segments.