look
you need to make some effect better and use the voices of mario , luigi and shadow , sliver also if you can bec you miss then a good part of the video
Reviews for "Sonic and Mario ep: 1"
Heres a hint:
Animate, dont write. If this is the best that you can do, you should seriously consider letting someone else write for you. The animation was fine but the extremely generic script and extremely overused plot made me throw up a little in my mouth.
This is seriously embarassing.
You quite literally fail when it comes to creating a worthwhile storyline, I've seriously seen better story ideas from Disney, and seriously, plastering your sprite animation with EXTREMELY FUCKING LOUD DBZ sound effects does not get you any points either.
Obviously all the creativity has been taken out of sprite flashes as of late, but seriously, try something else, we already have enough of these, and if you can't do them right ,don't do them at all.
heh
the other reviews have been quite soft in telling you this so i'll just say it...
its a complete rip-off. not a parody, not a coincidence.
its really unoriginal dude. Nice of you to put in the effort but its not working, not with this plotline.
eh...
Using other peoples work and using it as a form of inspiration are two different things, like the dudes below me it appears to me that you copied the ideas of another dudes work and tried incorporating your own twists. I've never made a flash so its not my place to say what you do and do not lack so all I'm going to say is try to go for something more original next time. Good attempt though.