Nicely done
Though it took too long with the text boxes with little amounts of material to read, find a way to use buttons on the screen or using the space-bar. Also, some SFX from the Mario and Sonic games would be nice,
Reviews for "Sonic and Mario ep: 1"
not bad at all
this is probably a tribute series to smbz hu? you may not surpass alvin but i see a lot of potenial keep practicing and probably this new series will get some attention oh yeah try using more character sounds and using the right sound effects at the right time and a little more stances for the characters wouldn't be bad for bowser most notably keep this in mind (and some other tips from other people too) practice up ok? good luck
Meh
good start, but since you're already doing it an 'video game" sprite style, why don't you go ahead and make "scrolling text" as well? I feel it would give more flow to the story.
You could also do some kind of background music to set the mood. sound effects are good. I think this series could go places if you trim it up a little bit.
Okay, but could be better...
Okay, the flash was alright, but it had a few flaws. Now being a fan of SMBZ, I have kinda high expectations when it comes to flash like this. Anyways, the story was pretty good, animation was okay, and fight scene could be a lot better. I kinda like the story, but it doesn't explain a lot, but I guess it'll be explained in future episodes. Your animation seems okay for a sprite movie. It seemed fluent and smooth enough, but there is room for a little more improvement. The fight scene was not too great, though. You could put more dramatical moves and animation. For explain, when Mario was flying up, the screen should be following him, not staying at Bowser. The music needs a little improvement too. There are too many places where there is no music. The dialogue needs to be sped up or at least controllable by the viewer.
In the end, this scores a 6/10. Tthe animation was a little lacking, the story is pretty interesting. I hope your future episodes will be better.
way more than i expected
great animation you made there! The fight is well done , storyline is easy to follow
maybe the name of the serie need some work (if you search for mario and sonic here...you might find 15,000 flashes XD)
overall , great sprite movie, keep it up