hmm...
wen reviewin first time flashes, u cant compare them to others, like most people, u have to sorta see if its good for a first time flash...
and i must say, for a first. it is VERY good, much better than my first flash.
Reviews for "Koala's Revenge"
Nice Job Again Brad
Like I need to restate what I said in class, right? XP
Animation's a little clunky in spots, particularly your much-feared walk cycle (which you mentioned to the class already). Just remember Flash was built for tweens and the more they're used the more real things can seem. Keyframing is tricky business and best handled with some serious onion skinning -- a graphics tablet that doubles as a monitor would probably be your best bet for the kind of animation you were doing here. For the equipment you had available, though, I'd say this is excellent.
--David
RaccoonRat responds:
Thanks Dave! Yea, I wish I had a monitor/tablet.
Nice....
Pretty good for your first Flash movie!
The music really fits well with the movie. You got facial expressions down. Overall, a good movie!
A different ending than what I thought would've happened. At least he got his revenge! XD
The only thing I would think to improve on is the character's walking. When the Zookeeper was walking, it just wasn't realistic. Work on making the character's movement more smoothly.
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Great first movie! Hope to see more from you!
NinjaKoopa
~The Koopa Clan~
RaccoonRat responds:
Thanks for the review! Yea the walk cycles were the hardest part.
great job!!!
Like everyone said, the walking. Other than that, great work! Especially enjoyed the minimal music and sound. This was a very visual piece and it worked.
not the worst ive seen
i have seen worse.... maybe more movements other than that it rocks.