Well..
I voted to save you, but be aware; you still have a long path to walk.
Only giving the benifit to you because i found your animation pretty fluid, althou that's not enough.
As far as it concerns me, this could pass; but surprise us in your next work.
thanks for the advice and the positive rating too.
hmn...
i didnt expect this to be that funny. it was short. if you made it alot longer and detailed it could be a good show and maybe if you added some more characters you could make a series
Woo First Review!
Pretty Good! All it needs is a preloader, instead of starting at a white screen. Other than that, really good!
yeah thanks but how do i add my pre loader in? i downloaded it but do i have to put it in my animation and re upload it?
needs different music
more length, and a bit more thought induced animation
Needs Lots of Work
Hey.
Here's a tip: If you are warning people that the sound may get messed up (which it did), you need to fix that BEFORE you upload it. There are tons of resources out there for help, or you could even try posting in NG forums, if you have not tried any of these solutions yet.
- Needs some sound effects.
- Graphics could have been better, even for stick figures.