Excellent! Such remarkable improvement!
You have most definitely made impressive amounts of improvement in this part. While you still have the basic issues of spelling and grammor and matching what you say, and the the text reads, you have improved dramatically. Your sound synching has been perfected, the speed has been fixed, and now flows with the situation better than it did before, and your action sequences are better than ever. For such improvement I give you the full rating. I do hope that the next part will show even more improvement, or at least not make the same mistakes as the earlier parts have. Strive to fix the errors, and you shall soon be as much a household name such as Alvin Earthworm or Kirbopher! 5/5
-Ultima, out-