Pretty good for a sprite movie!
The guy below me is right though. You GOTTA get those typos out of the subtitles! One thing I think would help is to put the subtitles in the top layer fixed, so they don't wiggle around so much. Still falls under the "fanfic" genre, but still good!
not bad
like the story and especially the sad fullmetal alchemist music at the end but you definitely need to improve on your movement arcs during jumps and fighting scenes. Do that and your next one will be even better.
Not bad... Not bad at all.
There are a few flaws that I've spotted from my own working with sprites. I've also seen a few typos in the script. I have to say, however, that I found it to be exceptionally well done.
"Pretty Sweet!"
That was pretty cool although it was also sad because ashura died.
I gave this submission a vote of "4"
Wow, you lot really tried. I have followed the series so far, I must admit that it had a slow start in part 1, but ever since part 2 I started liking it.
You took some ideas off SMBZ, not too bad, but it would have been nice to further more of your own ideas. Good Luck with part 4 and keep the same voice actors in the sequel.