my thoughts
that was mediocre. in the future, you might wanna make it so there is a chain of events occuring that is easy to follow w/ little thought. there were also some parts that were just not very smooth. this is not BAD though. just get some more practice in!
Alright, will do..
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boring
The rain animation was very cool but the rest was horrible .You should work on stickman animation . Practice a lot so your next animation will be much better :)
Hmm
For a first attempt at something serious it's not half bad.. The thing is that nothing really happens.
It looks pretty dull too, try to draw something mroe interesting than just stick men?
And make the next one longer too.
Has potential though, stick at it.
Much appreciated, man.
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Not that great
Quite a few things need to be improved on, one of which is that a few things, like the rain (I think another reviewer pointed out) wasnt very smooth, so that could be a thing to work on (obviously not the rain but the smoothness of the animation). Another would be to make it longer, because it didnt really explain much about the story, apart from the speaking at the part. I also got confused on who was who. Finally, improving the graphics when somebody gets shot should be another main priority if the animation is going to have alot of violence, as poor blood graphics will make this lose a chance of getting a good score.
Hopefully by the time the second is out, these improvements would of been accomplished. Keep at it. 3/10.
Uhhh
Well, I cant rly give a proper review buuuuut: The animation wasnt that smooth (Nothing moved but the rain). The guns were cheap. STICK FIGURES?!? C'mon man, everybody does stick figures. It was waaaay too short, and was that s'pose to be blood?
I 5'd it anyways: I could see a REAL story comin from this. AND to give a chance for some proper reviews, cuz it seems that your actually tryin unlike some spammers.
Yeah, well I did warn that it's very cliche..
Anyways, I'm glad you took the time to review it either way.
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