Nice
Very creative, i liked the music to it but it seemed like more of a display then a story. But to see this style of art and animation again is somewhat refreshing. Is there anyway that you could set up a galley at the end? Most of the sketches looked amazing, So I wouldnt mind seeing them one at a time. Eight out of ten seems fair. Eh?
Steve
Hey! Glad you liked it. You can see more of my works on our website 3j.com or my deviantart (you should find the link on 3j)
eh...wat?
Hey, i wish i hugged someone after each time I had an escapade in which i walked past some odd drawings that included : Old ladies, elderly women, cups and coffee mugs. Sweet, I'm jealous of this character...what ever character that is...
Storytelling?
It's hard to communicate strongly the theme of a short without vocals. But I think that it was unclear what you were going for, or if you simply wanted to use all of your sketches for something. It was good though.
Just plain brilliant
people are getting pissy over this because it doesn't have cartoon animals for them to jack off over. I thought this was brilliant. The animation was fluent, good looking and interesting. The concept was nice and the overal composition was mature in comparison to some of the other kitten caressing animation that exists on Newgrounds. Really well done =D
Amazing animation; concept could have been better
Your animation is outstanding. It's very smooth, and it shows you worked hard on the movements. However, the animation is really the only thing that grabs peoples' attention.
It was interesting to see pages of your sketchbook go by, with some of them being animated as well, but the motif was not clear-cut.
Personally, I liked being able to see the character walking through pages of the sketchbook. But it definitely could have been better if the walk-cycle wasn't as repetitive, and there was more of a story and purpose behind it all.