boring
Me : its ahhhh boring so ahhhh i shut it off ahhhhh and ahhh said ahhhh da this :constapation man: if you dont understand this *shrugs to poop* it sais *again* ahhhhhh yes ok on with the story its boring so i shut it off oh no not again *again shruging to poop* ahhhhhhh and said thiiiiiiis!!!!! oh god *poop drops* omg thx god:admincracker: ok bye
Next time I'll add tricky the clown, just for you.
boring
just another one of those animations where somebody gets a bunch of things theyve drawn and places them randomly on a screen
it could use some work
sorry i just didnt like it
that's okay.
woooooo....(BURP) my brain is full :D
that was good
thanks dude!
is that right?
very unique,but overwhelmingly boring,
Could be.
A little uninspired
There was nothing particularly wrong except the fact nothing new was brought to the table. You dont need a plot or story to make something unique, but it doesnt hurt to try something new either. I also found the audio somewhat annoying with the static as ambient noise. I realize this was probably intentional but for me, it didnt really add anything to the flash. I think you are a competant flash artist, this particular piece just felt a little uninspired. Sort of like a joke that needs to be explained to be enjoyed. Otherwise its just words. Part of what makes a great comedian is their ability to relate to their audience. Same for an artist, where the goal is to relate some theme or pattern to the viewer, I didnt find any unique theme here except for the appearence of randomness. Some may disagree but this is one reviewers opinion, take it as you will and good luck with future flashes.
Ah well, afterall I'm just a bored 14 year old, so it kinda makes sense. I'm trying to write a story now though.