Hmm... meh...
The flash isn't the kind of animation somebody would get all over it shouting "what the hell!? greatest work ever!" It is a smart animation. That's the proper adjetive to it: Smart.
It has a preety original concept, it's exactly the kind of things that regularly make me laugh, just like this did. The animation was a bit lazy, dare I say primitive, but yet still interesting, specially near the ending. Your acsent is somewhat funny and you made a good job on the voice acting, however, near the begining, there was an annoying sound that truly shows you didn't pay to much attention to the audio. HUGE mistake if you were aiming for the highest quality possible within the time you had making this.
Within the animation, the only thing that was eye catchy was the black hole effect. Besides from that, you relied TOO MUCH on tweening and too little into putting all you have into it. It is still a worth watching submission, just that.